As I walk around looking at the mysterious prickles, I wonder if it's magic and it teleports things underneath it.
"Don't go too close to that", said David. Man, if there's one thing I know, it's that David is full of......
"Go die in a hole", I yell at him. If there's one thing I could do, I would shove those prickles right in his face.
"Just saying...I wouldn't walk under it", he chuckles.
"Pfff, yeah right." I walked backwards and trip and fall under it. SQUISH!
"Haha", said David, "See ya Dookie".
I lift up my hand to see a brown sticky substance gooing through my fingers.
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